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How would you rate my channel ?

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    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Good, but needs improvements

    Votes: 1 100.0%

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MudanTV said:
Since it's a trailer it can't be really picked apart that easily. The music is nice and goes together with the feel but the editing, the scenes themselves seem kinda janky. Like walking into walls and stuff like that. Other than that it was okay.
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cte2ceR

Yeah I tried my best. But you need to understand not everyone's perfect. I hate cutting out clips like when I ran into the wall. It makes the video seem weird because I skipped frames and it would look strange. People really have good sights of vision to detect if someone skipped a frame of a clip. It would look choppy if I cut all of the errors out.(Besides the video looks cinematic enough. I honestly don't see many errors. As I can see the video only has me walking into things less then 5 times. In addition to that I tried some max Payne camera teqniques.) But I need all the details about the scenes being sloppy though. If you think that looks sloppy look at this video I made 7 months ago.

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Uploaded my new video today. Look I'll work on adding commentary. It's just that when people have commentary they talk over certain audio. People wanna focus on the video audio not the guy talking. A lot of youtubers tend to talk over game audio and it really gets annoying. That's why I don't add commentary, because I want the viewer to listen to the game audio without someone talking over it.[DOUBLEPOST=1480010293,1479960163][/DOUBLEPOST]What I added a thumbnail.
 
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Atomicred said:
I voted good but needs improvement, the video was great but everyone needs to continue improving.
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Alright thanks.
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Man why do so many users view the thread and not bother to at least vote ? Come on really guys. This is an advice thread so you could at least vote on the poll if you've viewed the thread. I have over 100 views, but only a few post from users who actually help me. It just annoys me that so many users view the thread not even bothering to at least vote on the poll so they can help me improve my videos.
 
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Jake103 said:
cte2ceR

Yeah I tried my best. But you need to understand not everyone's perfect. I hate cutting out clips like when I ran into the wall. It makes the video seem weird because I skipped frames and it would look strange. People really have good sights of vision to detect if someone skipped a frame of a clip. It would look choppy if I cut all of the errors out.(Besides the video looks cinematic enough. I honestly don't see many errors. As I can see the video only has me walking into things less then 5 times. In addition to that I tried some max Payne camera teqniques.) But I need all the details about the scenes being sloppy though.
Uploaded my new video today. Look I'll work on adding commentary. It's just that when people have commentary they talk over certain audio. People wanna focus on the video audio not the guy talking. A lot of youtubers tend to talk over game audio and it really gets annoying. That's why I don't add commentary, because I want the viewer to listen to the game audio without someone talking over it.[DOUBLEPOST=1480010293,1479960163][/DOUBLEPOST]What I added a thumbnail.
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So this is a reply to your message but I couldn't actually reply since I'm too big of a noob in the forum so I'm writing this here.
[No problem, I guess I didn't explain myself good enough sooo
Well, since you made a cinematic trailer, I was expecting something like really fancy and smooth. I understand that you can't exactly cut things shorter but since you were actually controlling the characters, you could have just done a reshoot until you got the movement right. The camera itself is okay but the "actors" could be better since you are making this in the game and by "janky" I meant walking into the walls, something that would just be reshot in an actual film :D
I'm guessing I wasn't complaining about your video quality but more about the movement of the characters.
For example at 0:40 in your prison escape video, the character caps through the camera and you can kinda see through him, I would count that as janky and reshoot it so inconsistencies wouldn't happen. or at 2:30 Michael just walks on top of the police officer and then runs away, I don't know if that was supposed to happen but I'm guessing it was just hard to get the movement right so it was confusing at first and you just stumbled into the scene. you can build your own sets with mods and cheats so you wouldn't have to do everything in the moment and hurry it.
These are all nitpicks though to help it make more cinematic. For me it's all about the flow of the scenes.]
 
MudanTV said:
So this is a reply to your message but I couldn't actually reply since I'm too big of a noob in the forum so I'm writing this here.
[No problem, I guess I didn't explain myself good enough sooo
Well, since you made a cinematic trailer, I was expecting something like really fancy and smooth. I understand that you can't exactly cut things shorter but since you were actually controlling the characters, you could have just done a reshoot until you got the movement right. The camera itself is okay but the "actors" could be better since you are making this in the game and by "janky" I meant walking into the walls, something that would just be reshot in an actual film :D
I'm guessing I wasn't complaining about your video quality but more about the movement of the characters.
For example at 0:40 in your prison escape video, the character caps through the camera and you can kinda see through him, I would count that as janky and reshoot it so inconsistencies wouldn't happen. or at 2:30 Michael just walks on top of the police officer and then runs away, I don't know if that was supposed to happen but I'm guessing it was just hard to get the movement right so it was confusing at first and you just stumbled into the scene. you can build your own sets with mods and cheats so you wouldn't have to do everything in the moment and hurry it.
These are all nitpicks though to help it make more cinematic. For me it's all about the flow of the scenes.]
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Alright thanks for the help man. I don't plan on fixing the issues, but I will just acknowledge it for next time.
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So far this is the only video with no errors
I made this video on October 19. It's says published in November 16 because that's when I made it public, but I actually uploaded this video a month ago.
 
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