please review

I created a new comedy channel and i have only one video in it Please can someone check it out and tell me what i should improve Please watch and give me advice

Hey fam! So I tried listening to most of your feedbacks. I lowered down the volume (It's down to 6%) of the background music. I tried not to cover my face as much with my pop-ups (I still have to improve on this a little more i think?). Most of you noticed a flickering light in my videos most of...