Would love some constructive criticism on my latest video about the cult Aum Shinrikyo

First of all thank you for checking out the thread and possibly the video, In my latest video I have changed the script writing process to be in the present tense as a way to tell a story instead of bombarding the viewer with facts, I have received a lot of good feedback on this compared to my previous style which was admittedly too dramatic and rather dry, The artwork is always improving as I do art studies daily to not only improve for myself but also for the channel, In my own opinion I feel like I may need to balance the audio just a little bit better, sometimes I feel as if the music is little too quiet, I would adore any constructive feedback, I've had a lot of talks with my viewers and I know many parts can be subjective but I want to fix any glaring issues as quickly as possible, Thank you for your time. - Mr. Blank

 
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