Will Review Your Videos

What I liked:

Sweet Intro :)

Funny voice over the phone lol

Good lesson to people who take breakups way to seriously lol

Good over dramatic acting






What I didn't like or could be improved on:

For a sweet intro like that, no offense but the title was pretty lame imo :) Its okay though lol

Shaky camera, I recommend stabilizing the camera, tripod, or have the filmer lean up against something to stop natural shaking

Could make a nicer transition imo, such as a gradient subtitle saying the next day instead of a choppy black transition with weird text

Could have a different camera angles on some parts, such as the therapy section, it was great cutting and directing, but it would be better to have a few different angles, such as right over his face, maybe even a point of view camera angle of him looking up at the camera, and you can see his arms flailing

All in all, it was enjoyable to watch, and I hope in further episodes that you put a little more "meat" in your videos because the video was good, but it started to get great when we actually got to see the content if you know what I mean. I'm sure that this was just a prologue type episode and that future videos will be even funnier. Try to work on different camera angles along with stopping the shakiness of the camera. I know it is hard when running on a budget of negative dollars, but at least try your best. So, enough of all this talk, I really did enjoy the content and hope you keep making more :)
 
Bosco said:
What I liked:

Sweet Intro :)

Funny voice over the phone lol

Good lesson to people who take breakups way to seriously lol

Good over dramatic acting






What I didn't like or could be improved on:

For a sweet intro like that, no offense but the title was pretty lame imo :) Its okay though lol

Shaky camera, I recommend stabilizing the camera, tripod, or have the filmer lean up against something to stop natural shaking

Could make a nicer transition imo, such as a gradient subtitle saying the next day instead of a choppy black transition with weird text

Could have a different camera angles on some parts, such as the therapy section, it was great cutting and directing, but it would be better to have a few different angles, such as right over his face, maybe even a point of view camera angle of him looking up at the camera, and you can see his arms flailing

All in all, it was enjoyable to watch, and I hope in further episodes that you put a little more "meat" in your videos because the video was good, but it started to get great when we actually got to see the content if you know what I mean. I'm sure that this was just a prologue type episode and that future videos will be even funnier. Try to work on different camera angles along with stopping the shakiness of the camera. I know it is hard when running on a budget of negative dollars, but at least try your best. So, enough of all this talk, I really did enjoy the content and hope you keep making more :)
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haha dude thank you so much! we really are on a budget! we dont have a tripod and its on my ipod so i guess im going to have to save up! :) thanks a lot for the advice! ill sub :)
 
yusuke said:
haha dude thank you so much! we really are on a budget! we dont have a tripod and its on my ipod so i guess im going to have to save up! :) thanks a lot for the advice! ill sub :)
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Wow, that actually is not the worst quality for an ipod, and while it may seem a hindrance, remember, your ipod is much smaller than many cameras, use that to your advantage when deciding on angles, your ipod can fit in those weird areas :)

good luck with your channel and I hope ya check mine out too :)
 
Bosco said:
Wow, that actually is not the worst quality for an ipod, and while it may seem a hindrance, remember, your ipod is much smaller than many cameras, use that to your advantage when deciding on angles, your ipod can fit in those weird areas :)

good luck with your channel and I hope ya check mine out too :)
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yeah i know :) luckily we have 3 ipods! but its just me and my friend we lost our other group but yeah dude thanks for the tips and i subscribed to your channel :) hopefully you stay tuned for new videos!
 
Sure thing man, and I certainly hope that you alone don't have 3 ipods cause that is quite a bit :p
 
What I liked:

Sorry man, but this video, other than it being minecraft, really needs some work. I'm not trying to be a big jerk, and you can argue your videos are better than mine, but before your upload your video, if you are in fact going for a viewer base and not just uploading for the purpose of showing to friends, but ask yourself " What did I do in this video, that is better than other videos, and would make a viewer want to subscribe?"

If you cannot answer this question, then your video has no business being uploaded in an attempt to gain viewers.

Sorry bro, but the plus is that all of the fixes are literally very easy. Get a mic, fix the aspect ratio, and make your videos interesting and enjoying to watch. Why do people like CSI ? they know what is going to happen, but the journey and the content is what gets them hooked :)

What I didn't like / needs to be changed:

Dude in this day and age, you really should be commentating especially within a minecraft server.

Change the aspect ratio to fit the entire screen (1280 x 720)

I would like for you to be on your own server ( you can learn port forwarding and download sever source codes, its really quite easy to do and get your friends playing on your own server. This is much more interesting for your viewership to watch and you'll notice that more people will interact with you, if only to find the server's ip.)

Wish that since no commentary is going on, some music playing would be nice. TBH to get through 10 minutes of just dry gameplay, is almost unbearable, you need to give the viewer something that makes them think that you are a cut above the rest.
 
I like your tips and the music is still processing on the video. Youtube is slow. I'll make the video HD next time but that will be hell to upload. Also hosting and uploading at the same time is just no. Thanks for the help!
 
Well, ofc you might not know but here are a few hosting tips (I've hosted many servers ;) ) :

1. Get a VPN (need donations)

2. Get a server (linux based is the best)

3.Get another router / wi fi unit so you can upload on one and game on the other

4. using a flash drive, upload from a different source

5. get a redirect name and use another ip has the public source such as this ip 62.168.192.11 and allow users to connect to that when you cannot be hosting directly.

6. Get a trusted friend to send .exe or .bat or .sh files to to host the server so everyone can play at certain times.

OFC you don't need to host, but if you ever want to those are some tips I recommend, also if you want to try out my friends server go to www.gophobia.com/main

Good luck with your channel!
 
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