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Here you go sir! Enjoy! *Turwinkle sneaks him a cookie and a soda. He fluffs the pillow for him* Comfortable? Can I get anything else for you before you view the episode? No? Okay..I will be right here if you need me!

 
KGATV

Did this video

Great ~

Your emotion of the topic. You didn't stumble on anything and you knew how you felt. You expressed your feelings and didn't hold back. The BG music was a nice fit and the way you showed the actual tweets on screen added to the serenity.

Ok ~
Just speak a bit, it was sorta tough to here everything you were saying in a few spots

Work On
~ Nothing really here, though be a bit more confident. Some people are a bit camera shy, not sure if you are, but it seems that you're a little bit timid in front of the camera.
Overall it was a great video :)
 
thedigblackbick said:
sure thing guys![DOUBLEPOST=1371483036,1371481857][/DOUBLEPOST]TechTac

MattAKATakasPort

Great
-It was an Original Let's Play or "yalP steL". Funny bits here and there and the quality was nice. You also seemed to be enjoying yourself which is always good.

Ok
-It was a bit awkward at times especially when there was no talking. BG Music may help, or sound effects?

Work On
-The video wasn't very enticing. The chat was ok, I chuckled here and there, but the video was somewhat boring to watch. I was actually listening to the chat the whole time instead of watching LOL. I would recommend trying to do something funny or interesting in the beginning so you hook your viewers for a few more minutes before continuing, that usually works.

Other than that, great work man.
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Hey thanks for the tips, Do you think I should cut the banter between me and Janna and just cut to only action parts like when I am interacting with the game? Also the beginning part where Janna is singing and I'm like "what?" was suppose to be the funny hook lol. I will release episode 2 which I think has a better hook =). Thanks again.
 
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