Rate my new Trailer

[IftiBashir]

In preparation for the new 2013 YouTube layout, Ive been working on a new channel design and a new trailer.
Would like some opinions please! Ive had some feedback on the channel baner already, so aiming more for some feedback on the trailer.....

The trailer isnt live yet - its obviously uploaded but Ive set it to unlisted so that only those I share the link with can view. Waiting for the new layout before it goes public etc.

Thanks in advance!

 

[Chef Kendra]

Wow, I'm all hyped up. That is really good! I would add subscribe at the end though. You always want a call to action. I often forget myself. You got me thinking that I actually do need a trailer, I was just going to toss up my most popular vid but maybe I will make one.

 

[IftiBashir]

Thanks - I didnt want to talk and ask people to subscribe etc. Just wanted to leave the option open but create a video with a gimpse into what the channel is about etc.
I think you're right though, I need to add some subscribe text or something at the end........

 

[Carl Hinton]

That is a trailer not an intro to your vids right? Its very, very nice

 

[YKmovies]

It Is Great And I Liked YOur Videos Too Good Job

 

[IftiBashir]

That is a trailer not an intro to your vids right? Its very, very nice

Yup thats just a trailer for the new YouTube layout. I dont really use Intro's in my videos, unless they are informative, as I feel it puts viewers off etc.

It Is Great And I Liked YOur Videos Too Good Job

Thanks!

 

[Switchbox]

I think it looks really great!
Although, I feel you used too many effects in the trailer, more doesn't always mean better.

 

[IftiBashir]

Ive added a second version, which includes some text at the end to highlight what my channel is and to subscribe!

Which is better?

 

[MrBroZillaa]

Wow this looks so professional, its clear short and lets people know what to expect from the channel, great job, its very in choosing from the 2 versions as both are really good, for some reason i prefer the 1st version

 

[IftiBashir]

Wow this looks so professional, its clear short and lets people know what to expect from the channel, great job, its very in choosing from the 2 versions as both are really good, for some reason i prefer the 1st version

Thanks. I can't decide between the two. The only difference is the second has the summary at the end, along with the 'subscribe' text, but on the other hand I question whether I actually need this? I mean, if someone likes the channel they will subscribe anyway regardless of whether the next is there at the end or not!