Please review my newest video, I am filming my next one now and want to know what to improve.

[PaintPaintPaint]

All my other videos besides my new one I am playing a character and doing comedy. This time I was completely serious and just painted one of my paintings. I would like any suggestions or things that need improvement. I have kind of figured out what to do for my comedy paintings, but don't know about this one.

Thanks a ton to anybody who takes time to watch, and also shoot me a line if you have suggestions for something I should paint. As that is part of my show painting viewer suggestions.