Please Review My Channel: aDrunkP3NQU1N

Michael Carlyle

Michael Carlyle

The Active Member!
Hey Guys!, I'd Love it if you guys could come and check out my videos!, I make videos on App Reviews, Hacks and Everything Else!

So here are my Latest Videos!:
Craziness App Review - http://bit.ly/CrazinessAppReview
Temple Run Score Glitch/Cheat - http://bit.ly/TempleRunGlitch
Temple Run App Review - http://bit.ly/TempleRunReview
Snappers App Review - http://bit.ly/SnappersReview
Review: Angry Birds iPad 2 Case - http://bit.ly/iPadAngryBirdsCase

So Thanks Again!
Michael Carlyle (aDrunkP3NQU1N)
 
Your channel is set up well although a little more information in your About Me wouldn't go amiss, something to let people know what your channel is all about, I know the videos make it obvious but telling them in your About Me is good.

I think you could improve on the intro length, it's roughly 9 seconds long and it could be a whole lot shorter, perhaps 2 or 3 seconds long would be better or even 1 second if you can find a good sound effect that lasts that long. People will be right into the review that way, you could try introducing what the product is at the start in person, show a quick intro and then get on with the review, I like that formatting with videos like yours.

Other than that I think the lighting in some of your older videos is much better than now and as time passes things should be improving, if you can record with some better lighting then that will be a big improvement. I think the graphics used for both your intro and outro could be improved upon, the font will be unreadable to some people with it being all fancy, if you need some new ones done feel free to post a request here and offer some cash as incentive :D

http://yttalk.com/forums/branding-and-channel-design.18/

I dont mind doing something fairly basic for you as long as it isnt OTT custom lol

Overall I think other than a few minor things you are doing well there. Keep it up :)
 
Michael said:
Your channel is set up well although a little more information in your About Me wouldn't go amiss, something to let people know what your channel is all about, I know the videos make it obvious but telling them in your About Me is good.

I think you could improve on the intro length, it's roughly 9 seconds long and it could be a whole lot shorter, perhaps 2 or 3 seconds long would be better or even 1 second if you can find a good sound effect that lasts that long. People will be right into the review that way, you could try introducing what the product is at the start in person, show a quick intro and then get on with the review, I like that formatting with videos like yours.

Other than that I think the lighting in some of your older videos is much better than now and as time passes things should be improving, if you can record with some better lighting then that will be a big improvement. I think the graphics used for both your intro and outro could be improved upon, the font will be unreadable to some people with it being all fancy, if you need some new ones done feel free to post a request here and offer some cash as incentive :D

http://yttalk.com/forums/branding-and-channel-design.18/

I dont mind doing something fairly basic for you as long as it isnt OTT custom lol

Overall I think other than a few minor things you are doing well there. Keep it up :)
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Thanks!, I'll try to improve, the only thing that I cannot improve on is the 'Lighting Situation' because I film my videos off of my iPad 2, I use a AE/AF lock so you can see the screen of my iPhone, otherwise the screen looks to bright and you are un-able to see whats on the screen.
 
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