I will review a specific video.

Heya, thanks for taking your time to do this :)

I'd like a review on whichever video is in my signature when you read this. You can make the review public :D
 
TheodeAPL said:
No worries. :wavespin:
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Not that good at game critiques and reviews but ill give it a crack!
Positives
-Really good face cam sync, no lagging of voice and movement of mouth so thats all good.
-Clear mic.
-Some nice action oriented gameplay!
Improvements
-The length, most youtubers dont have longer attention spans then like 5 minutes.You could maybe put the series in either 2 or 3 parts or even included more jump cuts.
-Try and keep more engaged with your audience,you are a good commentator but try talking at ALL times. Your audience never want to feel disengaged with you as they may lose interest or even click off the video, and you don't want that happening!
-The influx of heated action and lots of characters hitting and damaging eachtother could muddle them up. Try and use a highlighting effect or something in your editing software to maybe highlight your character. Or maybe even zoom in when action takes place or something good happens.

Overall nice video but my attention span kind of backfired on me 3 quarters of the way through :( sorry.

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ZoomZike said:
Heya, thanks for taking your time to do this :)

I'd like a review on whichever video is in my signature when you read this. You can make the review public :D
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Again im not to good at reviewing gameplay but ill give it a go! Its gonna be more of a first impression for a long video, sorry :(
Positives
-Good and clear quality mic
-Kept the audience engaged by talking throughout
-Clear pronunciation
-Obviously a channel based on sonic games and as you kept on that topic it shows how knowledgable you are about the subject
Improvements
-As i said with the last review, i feel a shorter video would keep the attention of the watcher and thus benefit you more.
-Just a thought, you could do what many COD players do where they talk about a iirelevant topic to the game or new news over gameplay(E.g the new youtube layout or something idk whatever ahaa), but yours would be unique as it would be sonic gameplay.

Sorry i could not make as many points as you would expect but your video is of a good quality :)
 
I'll give you the video with my voice acting, haha.


This is going to be interesting =D. You can public it.
 
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