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Ill try and give constructive criticism aswell so try not to be offended! It will be my own personal view. If you want it to be public i will type it in the thread and if you want it to be more personal ill pm you 

On it now!public if you want
that was some nice critique!On it now![DOUBLEPOST=1368748225,1368747529][/DOUBLEPOST]Wow, that was actually quite surprising.
Positives.
- Good cinematic trailer style
-not to long
-Doesnt give too much of actual video away, just focuses on action points so basically no spoilers.
- Gives a good impression and may cause someone to look into full vid.
-Good reactions to being shot and realistic zombie like hordes and movement.
Improvements
-Y no 720 p? But yeah man some people will click off of a video if its not in HD, that's the standard of youtube nowawdays, i would suggest trying to edit and render your videos in 720-1080p.
- The use of ketchup could really boost the realness of the zombies. Although i could tell they are zombies they stilll just look like ordinary kids going crazy. The use of ketchup can go a long way, for example when the tall guy with the blue cap is shooting the zombies and the zombie attacks him, the scene would have looked so much better if the zombie had ketchup/fake blood on their teeth, mouth and hands.
Please get back to me if you think this was a fair review and i did okay?![]()
Thanks man! It was my first time critiquing aswell so i didnt know if i made any invalid points or whatever.that was some nice critique!
i have no idea why it isnt 720p the camera records in 1080p
i swear it was before but oh well ill look into it thanks anyways!
its very good for a first but look around see how other people do their critiquesThanks man! It was my first time critiquing aswell so i didnt know if i made any invalid points or whatever.
Yeah will do man, if you want any other future vids reviewed it would be my pleasureits very good for a first but look around see how other people do their critiques
i shall remember you!Yeah will do man, if you want any other future vids reviewed it would be my pleasure![]()
Hahaa okay mani shall remember you!
Ill try and give constructive criticism aswell so try not to be offended! It will be my own personal view. If you want it to be public i will type it in the thread and if you want it to be more personal ill pm you![]()