MotokiMaxted
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I've noticed that this forum is very positive and that's super great. However, I think it's hard for people to improve when they're barely getting negative feedback. Therefore, I've decided to "hate" on your videos to hopefully make them better. I am no way perfect in any means or close to it but that doesn't mean I can't help.
Post a video below if you're VIP and if you're not, just post below saying you'd like for me to check out your channel. If anything comes to my head when watching that I don't like, I won't stop to tell you. I won't be putting anything positive because you can get that anywhere else on here. Some examples I might mention are your video quality, audio, lighting, and channel design. Also, this is open to anyone to put in their negative feedback too. Please do not say anything in a rude way, and make it constructive as that is what I will try to do. Also, remember this is to help you, that it is opinion based and I'm not trying to ruin your day or anything
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SweetieGirlyVlogger Hey I don't like your thumbnails, try not to use clipart and maybe instead use a frame from your video. I would more likely click on it. The bad lighting in your "da news" made it so I couldn't see your face. You move around to much in several of your recent videos, try relaxing before you start a video.
Frankie I prefer if people use other words than retard. When you get scared/freaked out/laughing, don't be afraid to be loud. Maybe you're always a soft speaker but I like having highs and lows in volume. Shows more emotion to connect with i guess. That's it though.
FlipRJ Both, and I'll just watch first couple of minutes
. I don't really like your teal background on your channel. Your shots of the kids should be smooth to flow. Try making a cheap steadicam. This isn't something you could control but some of the acting wasn't that great. The film wasn't at all color corrected as far as I could tell. A little of that can really help. You should really work on your audio. Work to make it flow better between shots. You can hear the scenes cut. Also, you can hear laughter behind the scenes occasionally.
ApexxWolf Watched a couple. Since they're short I only have a little bit. Comedy is usually done fast and should have some slow parts but some slow parts just didn't seem to fit. After the funny part, move on to the next thing or end. asdfmovie is an excellent example to look at. I hope I made sense.
Nickoliflower Vlogs Besides your newest video, all the others were bad quality, I'm guessing you already have that fixed though. I'll talk about your newst vid. Stop looking at the camera's screen. It makes it feel awkward. It was hard to keep attention of your video, it was very slow paced. When you said "here's the picture" there was no picture. I realize your lazy but if you're not willing to show effort, makes you seem not serious about anything. A recommend adding music to help will with the awkward boringness.
FibulaSpry Nothing really negative as it was short. First thought, higher pitched voice which kinda is hard to take seriously when you're talking about political issues. On my computer, there is a green strip on the right of your channel banner art. Is that meant to be there or?
Katherinejane001 Try to add more switches to other scenes of you singing. Sometimes, the shot of you signing is long and kinda awkward. I suggest getting more shorts from different distances and not just you're face. Adding shots outside of your house will also add production value.
thedigblackbick. Thanks! Try making your videos shorter. This could be done by starting up with your going to talk about in the video sooner and leaving out things that don't really go with the story. You're voice rarely ever fluctuates in volume or pitch. Maybe you're holding back from showing emotion but if you do, it'd help keep attention and connect with viewers.
Munchito696 Yeah! I was trying to find and link it but I couldn't remember the thread name. Your videos vary a lot from weather to dogs. Maybe focus on one or two things on your channel. To be honest, I don't understand your videos. I don't really understand why I should watch them. Even if another person who likes one of your videos likes it, they won't become a follower because your videos jump different types. If you showed your videos in a walk-around-vlog format, I would be much more likely to watch. If you're showing something specific, make sure to show just that and not have any extra time which bores watchers.
natsu84 the effects of shooting and blood were super cheesy and didn't really fit. When I saw the toys kinda just standing there I didn't know whether to laugh or be scared. "Unite" is a verb so I would've liked to see maybe they step close to each other or something. Scary videos involve a lot of shaky footage and moving with characters. In trailer type videos, there is usually a lot of cool shots like going around characters and cool angles, try doing that.
Ficcan You're not doing a terrible job of this but try talking more. I realize your concentrated but I kinda got bored. If you can't think of anything, just make grunts or sound effects to keep attention. That's all I could think of.
Post a video below if you're VIP and if you're not, just post below saying you'd like for me to check out your channel. If anything comes to my head when watching that I don't like, I won't stop to tell you. I won't be putting anything positive because you can get that anywhere else on here. Some examples I might mention are your video quality, audio, lighting, and channel design. Also, this is open to anyone to put in their negative feedback too. Please do not say anything in a rude way, and make it constructive as that is what I will try to do. Also, remember this is to help you, that it is opinion based and I'm not trying to ruin your day or anything
_________I just put them here because I'm unable to post in this section__________
SweetieGirlyVlogger Hey I don't like your thumbnails, try not to use clipart and maybe instead use a frame from your video. I would more likely click on it. The bad lighting in your "da news" made it so I couldn't see your face. You move around to much in several of your recent videos, try relaxing before you start a video.
Frankie I prefer if people use other words than retard. When you get scared/freaked out/laughing, don't be afraid to be loud. Maybe you're always a soft speaker but I like having highs and lows in volume. Shows more emotion to connect with i guess. That's it though.
FlipRJ Both, and I'll just watch first couple of minutes
. I don't really like your teal background on your channel. Your shots of the kids should be smooth to flow. Try making a cheap steadicam. This isn't something you could control but some of the acting wasn't that great. The film wasn't at all color corrected as far as I could tell. A little of that can really help. You should really work on your audio. Work to make it flow better between shots. You can hear the scenes cut. Also, you can hear laughter behind the scenes occasionally.ApexxWolf Watched a couple. Since they're short I only have a little bit. Comedy is usually done fast and should have some slow parts but some slow parts just didn't seem to fit. After the funny part, move on to the next thing or end. asdfmovie is an excellent example to look at. I hope I made sense.
Nickoliflower Vlogs Besides your newest video, all the others were bad quality, I'm guessing you already have that fixed though. I'll talk about your newst vid. Stop looking at the camera's screen. It makes it feel awkward. It was hard to keep attention of your video, it was very slow paced. When you said "here's the picture" there was no picture. I realize your lazy but if you're not willing to show effort, makes you seem not serious about anything. A recommend adding music to help will with the awkward boringness.
FibulaSpry Nothing really negative as it was short. First thought, higher pitched voice which kinda is hard to take seriously when you're talking about political issues. On my computer, there is a green strip on the right of your channel banner art. Is that meant to be there or?
Katherinejane001 Try to add more switches to other scenes of you singing. Sometimes, the shot of you signing is long and kinda awkward. I suggest getting more shorts from different distances and not just you're face. Adding shots outside of your house will also add production value.
thedigblackbick. Thanks! Try making your videos shorter. This could be done by starting up with your going to talk about in the video sooner and leaving out things that don't really go with the story. You're voice rarely ever fluctuates in volume or pitch. Maybe you're holding back from showing emotion but if you do, it'd help keep attention and connect with viewers.
Munchito696 Yeah! I was trying to find and link it but I couldn't remember the thread name. Your videos vary a lot from weather to dogs. Maybe focus on one or two things on your channel. To be honest, I don't understand your videos. I don't really understand why I should watch them. Even if another person who likes one of your videos likes it, they won't become a follower because your videos jump different types. If you showed your videos in a walk-around-vlog format, I would be much more likely to watch. If you're showing something specific, make sure to show just that and not have any extra time which bores watchers.
natsu84 the effects of shooting and blood were super cheesy and didn't really fit. When I saw the toys kinda just standing there I didn't know whether to laugh or be scared. "Unite" is a verb so I would've liked to see maybe they step close to each other or something. Scary videos involve a lot of shaky footage and moving with characters. In trailer type videos, there is usually a lot of cool shots like going around characters and cool angles, try doing that.
Ficcan You're not doing a terrible job of this but try talking more. I realize your concentrated but I kinda got bored. If you can't think of anything, just make grunts or sound effects to keep attention. That's all I could think of.
