How can I improve?

[NewsOfTech]

So I have seen a few of these and I just wondered if people could take a look at my channel and give a critique. You can be critical I won't be offended.

-Thanks in advance

 

[Bolty Nips]

It looks very smart!

 

[NewsOfTech]

It looks very smart!

Thanks man PowerSlave26 did for me he is a awesome dude.

 

[alanlee]

What about a nice background? Otherwise video is decent

 

[NewsOfTech]

What about a nice background? Otherwise video is decent

You cant do back grounds on the one channel, or do you mean change my banner?

 

[alanlee]

Rather than the red/pinky background that you have.. a graphic. Hope that makes sense

 

[NewsOfTech]

Rather than the red/pinky background that you have.. a graphic. Hope that makes sense

Think you might be looking at the wrong channel? this is me.

 

[MrDanINSANE]

Hello
I had a quick look on your channel and your current intro video, I watched your review, the edit is nice but I would highly suggest you to put a low-volume background music while you review / talk / demonstrate. and mute the music if you want your viewers to listen to something during the review, then bring the background music back. You'll better use royalty free music usually it's very cheap and you have lots of possibilities.

Beside that, good job keep up the good working!

* Sorry about my bad English.

 

[NewsOfTech]

Hello
I had a quick look on your channel and your current intro video, I watched your review, the edit is nice but I would highly suggest you to put a low-volume background music while you review / talk / demonstrate. and mute the music if you want your viewers to listen to something during the review, then bring the background music back. You'll better use royalty free music usually it's very cheap and you have lots of possibilities.

Beside that, good job keep up the good working!

* Sorry about my bad English.

Thats actually a very good idea, thank you. I will look into doing that!

 

[ZwebackHD]

Hello
I had a quick look on your channel and your current intro video, I watched your review, the edit is nice but I would highly suggest you to put a low-volume background music while you review / talk / demonstrate. and mute the music if you want your viewers to listen to something during the review, then bring the background music back. You'll better use royalty free music usually it's very cheap and you have lots of possibilities.

Beside that, good job keep up the good working!

* Sorry about my bad English.

Yes, a nice background track helps add an entertainment component to your content. Fully recommend that but make sure it's on low volume. Don't want to mask your voice.