Hollysaurus
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I'm wondering if I should spend more time scripting the basic skeleton of my videos. I don't want to seem fake either! Have any of you noticed a difference in your videos when scripting or not?!
Sweet thanks.. The reason being is a few friends have said that I go off topic too much?! So they thought maybe if I scripted, that it would be better and I could let more of my personality show ?!I've looked at some of your videos and in my opinion for unboxing videos I don't so much think that it should be scripted more just think of a few categories to cover or a few things to address the other videos on your channel don't really need to be scripted since they are just hauls challenges and vlogs
You should just talk straight and not do scripts until you've got more of a flow on what your doing, eventually lot's of sentences will come out natural anyway.
Like your video wacky widgets, at the start you seemed to be reading off a script and struggled with words like contraptions.
also I kept looking over my left shoulder because it seemed you were looking that way, your much more engaging when looking directly at the camera, whatever it is your looking at, put a towel over it.
also when you said.. "for today's wacky widget we have" it sounded like you were kinda making a mockery of it.
the best part of that little bit was just after when you said.. "bubble pony tailer" it was very fast and natural, I imagine that's really you.
so I think i'm saying, talk as if your just talking to a friend on the phone, that's what i'd want to listen to with your kind of video's. Just you naturally.
Your good to look at, nice skin and armpits and I do like bushy eyebrows so let 'em grow