Critique me. Drake Meets Kill Bill

[CallmeJake]

Hi Family! I'm an amateur Youtuber who will be making videos on helping beginners learn about Cryptocurrency, so that everyone can enjoy financial freedom. I also will be making Social Commentaries, Music Videos and Short Films, & anything I think can inspire us to lead more interesting & fulfilling lives. This is my first serious video edit using PowerDirector on chromebook, it's a Cinematic Lyric Music Video for Drake's "Girls Want Girls," heavily inspired by Kill Bill movie series directed by Quentin Tarantino. I would like a review just critiquing the video's editing quality and perhaps you can give me some feedback or advice on ways to improve on my next video. I am a new youtuber, but I am proud of the progress I have made in the week I've been on YT. I appreciate any feedback or support , thank you so much!!Drake Meets Kill Bill Cinamatic Video