Can't Have You - Original Song By Katherinejane001 and GaffersMusic

[LimeFitnessRadio]

awesome song i like the music. i always appreciate a good original song.

 

[Kath]

awesome song i like the music. i always appreciate a good original song.

Thanks so much again for listening!! That's awesome! Glad you are enjoying it

 

[Jamie]

i like it, it has a nice tune and the piano parts turned out wonderful! and your voice really suits the song and the lyrics. but what you should try to do the next time is include a climax. i was missing the "wow" part and the "that's the heart of the song" part, you know what i mean? it still needs something that attracts the listeners attention and makes them remember the song forever.

 

[Kath]

i like it, it has a nice tune and the piano parts turned out wonderful! and your voice really suits the song and the lyrics. but what you should try to do the next time is include a climax. i was missing the "wow" part and the "that's the heart of the song" part, you know what i mean? it still needs something that attracts the listeners attention and makes them remember the song forever.

Thank you! I usually do have a climax in my songs...you're right....this one I just the simple pump after the verse into the chorus again. Thank you for the feed back, it is much appreciated