Be Extremely Honest

[Frrostty]

I have been taking a break from youtube for the last week or two. This hiatus will continue until late August or early September. When I come back I will have better equipment camera, PC, ect.
I would love to here any all critiques about my channel videos, playlist, content.
P.S.
My channel is going to be about gaming news and let's plays.

 

[Zero]

I would recommend running the recording a couple times to get the wording precise. 2 dry runs and then your released video would help clear up a lot of confusion, pausing, and general lack of ideas when talking about something.

Audio is great

Videos could use some footage of the thing you're talking about, like E3 content in the E3 video. Just be careful that nothing is restricted from showing on YouTube (copyrighted).

 

[Jawad Soomro]

Banner is nice, but I would say make the blue fonts a bit brighter, otherwise the font style is cool
same goes for avatar as well
Channel layout should be changed by going to navigation panel as it is the professional layout
I think you should place some designs and text on thumbnails, it should be good enough to attract viewers
you should make an intro and outro for your videos
Audio quality is awesome and I like your commentary
All the best