Writing a Channel Trailer

[TheCuttingRoomFloor]

I've been trying to write the script for my official YouTube channel trailer for two days now (since Wednesday) and I've got most of it down, but there's just one paragraph I can't quite finish, the script is below:

"In a world where dramatic YouTube channel trailers aren't a thing, one man will make one anyway, because f*** it why not.



Get ready for a channel critics are calling: “Who the hell is The Cutting Room Floor” Jerry from the Garage and “Ok, I guess” Ross from Australia.

So get strap yourself in for a channel featuring: fancy pants tutorials, static shots of kitchens, stick figures with expensive cameras and intelligent stick figures.

This… is… The Cutting Room Floor. Coming January 2016. Only on YouTube. You see what I did there, I made it sound exclusive

Be there or, actually please just be there, it would be very much appreciated."

The gap in the script is where I'm having trouble, I originally wrote "Join The Cutting Room Floor on a journey..." but that felt too weird. I was thinking of dropping the "Get ready for a channel critics are calling...".

Could anyone help me?

 

[CertainGamer]

I don't think what you originally wrote sounds weird actually.

(Doesn't try to make my own voice sound epic while reading the script or something..)

 

[WeiseGamer]

I like it as it is now. Tad different then the way I did mine (in my signature below) but both have that commercial feel lol

 

[TheCuttingRoomFloor]

I don't think what you originally wrote sounds weird actually.

(Doesn't try to make my own voice sound epic while reading the script or something..)

I like it as it is now. Tad different then the way I did mine (in my signature below) but both have that commercial feel lol

Thanks for your comments, I hope to record it tomorrow.

 

[IanCro]

The script is great and funny. I did my "epic" voice while reading it and I loved it. Tell us when it's on YT so we can see it (and like it)