Would love some feedback

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DeanDK

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Hello,

I would really appreciate if some people took the time to review my video and provide some feedback. I understand that the topic of watchmaking isn't popular especially with most of the audience who frequent youtube.

But if they were to stumble upon my channel or video by accident, what would you think is entertaining.

I think I should make improvements in camera focus and music alignment.

Would you think lowering music and talking to explain the processes be better? The video wasn't really an instructional how-to. More showing the processes involved.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to your reply.

Dean

 
definitely a very specific niche you're catering to! i think it'll be difficult for you to catch the interest of people who stumble across your channel as it's not super relatable. adding commentary may help with that, as i don't know anything about what you're doing and to me it looked like similar processes again and again. not trying to say the work you do isn't cool, it was super intricate, but because i don't have an interest in the topic already it was difficult for me to follow what was going on. that fact alone would likely make me click away. the clips were also very long, so maybe you could consider speeding the footage up?

for people who have found your channel because they are searching for watchmaking (i think is what your channel is about, your channel description is a tad bit confusing), optimizing seo, title, thumbnails and your channel art will help. there's tons of forums here with tips on that :)
 
Hi Georgia,

You have been very helpful, I understand what you are saying about the relatedness to different users. I did have a feeling about the length of the clips between cuts.

I will definitely start working on the channel description and optimizing.

Plenty for me to work on.Thank you for taking the time out of your day to watch and reply to me here. I wish you all the success!
 
I actually quite enjoyed watching it, it had kinda ASMR like feel to it if only the music was more mellow and chill (like something from the Nujabes). Clips were nice but sometimes a bit too long for my taste, unless acompanied by some text, maybe telling what you're doing at that point in time to grab more attention from the viewer and keep them waiting for more.
 
Thanks MudanTV!

Yeah I would like something a little mellow, but I'm struggling a little to find the music. I do like a channel called bluntedbeatz, but they do not unfortunately license any of their music.

Thanks, if the clips are a little long I will add text or voice over.

I'm taking plenty of notes. You have shown me to Nujabes :)

Thanks for taking to the time and watch and reply to me. I hope you succeed in your youtube goals :)
 
DeanDK said:
Thanks MudanTV!

Yeah I would like something a little mellow, but I'm struggling a little to find the music. I do like a channel called bluntedbeatz, but they do not unfortunately license any of their music.

Thanks, if the clips are a little long I will add text or voice over.

I'm taking plenty of notes. You have shown me to Nujabes :)

Thanks for taking to the time and watch and reply to me. I hope you succeed in your youtube goals :)
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I watched the first video on your channel and must say that it puts pretty much all my points to rest. The music is better, clips move at a better pace and you have text :D I'm actually invested in what you are going to do next with your videos.
 
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