Where Can I Improve with my Minecraft Let's Play/Build?

[KingChiggy]

Hello everyone! So, a couple of weeks back, I started a Minecraft series where I will be playing the Pixelmon mod and also attempting to build a lot, as I wanted my Minecraft Series to initially be a Let's Build, but had no idea where to start. This is the first episode where I actually start to build, but I am not completely sure that it is alright, and I feel like not only this episode, but the series in general needs some kind of improvement.

I would really love to get your opinions on it, and maybe some ideas on where I could take the series. I would really appreicate it!

 

[Zero]

Find stuff to talk about, it helps you from saying "Ummm" a lot. Content should be unique and buildings should be original. Try building using different methods as well as attempting things that look cool. I got 2k views on my video of a tutorial of Tekkit because I went straight to the point and showed the process in a quick and simple way. Teaching others how to do these things will help a lot. Try building cool looking things such as a maze of connected rooms between mountains.