Whats wrong with it?

Toaster

Toaster

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Trying something new with editing and I wanted to know if its working. So If you would watch this short vid and tell me what you think. Any feedback, whats good whats bad, is appreciated.

 
Hey there! I like the editing you did, it must of taken a while to make. But I don't think you need to add almost every thing you and your friend say in a subtitle. It takes away our focus to read what's on the screen, and we miss out on the actual gameplay. I would add subtitles when people shout, when people mess up their words, repeated words, or elongate their words. For example, at 1:03, and 2:17 that is a perfect usage of the subtitles you did. As for colors, the green color was readable but the pink? one wasn't as readable to me (I'm colorblind lol) I would stick to brighter colors just for general readability. But other than that, everything else was really good! You have good chemistry with your friend, and your commentary was great. So again, no need to add so much subtitles.
 
Not bad at all. There's some dead space that you could always fill with more random rants or chatter. I do like the idea of a different font for the words. The timing on them was (were?) perfect but it wasn't the easiest to read really quickly. I also think typing out whatever messed up word they said in what it sounded like would be hilarious too. Not bad overall though!
 
Thanks for the comments guys and i agree i should probably tone down the subtitles to just add accents to funny moments. much appreciated
 
The font used was very very very hard to read, people usually use big bold fonts that are easy to read so the cursive and purple and other colors made it hard and sometimes they passed by way too quick so I suggest next time using just big bold clear fonts
 
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