What's missing from this video?

[lucagrabacr]

Hey guys, while my gta stuff are getting more views than my Second Life stuff, I believe it's mostly just the number of people using those two things that are different.

I do wonder though, is there anything that seems off / anything I can improve on judging from this Second Life video I made a while ago? Any feedback would be appreciated, thanks

 

[TeraVex]

Well, it's just common that GTA will perform better than second life because GTA is a more recognizable title. The video is great, there's nothing wrong with it from what I see but in the future maybe make the video at least 10 minutes long due to YouTube's algorithms preferring longer videos to shorter ones.