What do you think of my YouTube Channel? Feedback would be appreciated

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Hello there guys, I would like some feedback on my channel as well as my videos too. Is there anything I need to improve on? I feel like my voice need a bit of work on but the content that I put in my latest video seem alright. The other two last video have quite a lot of issue and able to address some in my latest video.

My channel consist of Top 5 and Gaming content for now on.

Here is the URL to my channel.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxTvnWyMypRwKgWOfUkAswQ
 
Hello, I did a brief overview:
1. Cover image. The background is low-res so there's pixelization, it's fine if that is a look that you're going for. It should say: ''The channel that aims toward everyone.''
2. Profile pic. It's fine; I'd delete the part under 'how's it going' because it's too tiny to read and it'd be less cluttered.
3. Thumbnails. Good to go!
4. Editing. Seems fine for the most part, I didn't go through a lot of it, but from what I could see, it's okay.
5. Narration. This is the area where you need to work the most on. You need to improve your English (you often say company when you clearly mean plural, companies). I don't know if you do this, but I suggest you do the following: write the script for your video in Microsoft Word, and then use the Spell check option with grammar checking turned on - that will not only remove most glaring errors, it will, over time, teach you better english. :)
Regarding narration itself, just search different voice / narration tutorials on YT and practice practice practice. :)
 
Boki said:
Hello, I did a brief overview:
1. Cover image. The background is low-res so there's pixelization, it's fine if that is a look that you're going for. It should say: ''The channel that aims toward everyone.''
2. Profile pic. It's fine; I'd delete the part under 'how's it going' because it's too tiny to read and it'd be less cluttered.
3. Thumbnails. Good to go!
4. Editing. Seems fine for the most part, I didn't go through a lot of it, but from what I could see, it's okay.
5. Narration. This is the area where you need to work the most on. You need to improve your English (you often say company when you clearly mean plural, companies). I don't know if you do this, but I suggest you do the following: write the script for your video in Microsoft Word, and then use the Spell check option with grammar checking turned on - that will not only remove most glaring errors, it will, over time, teach you better english. :)
Regarding narration itself, just search different voice / narration tutorials on YT and practice practice practice. :)
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Alright thank you so much :) I would take up on your advice.
 
All looks good. I'm not big on gaming channels so got nothing for you really. But I did want to say respectfully I don't agree with Boki comment on narration. I listened and is fine! I think it adds to your character. Don't change yourself. Your dialogue /accent is all part of your identity.. Don't change who you are. Nobody needs the queens perfect English.
 
UhoohExtra said:
All looks good. I'm not big on gaming channels so got nothing for you really. But I did want to say respectfully I don't agree with Boki comment on narration. I listened and is fine! I think it adds to your character. Don't change yourself. Your dialogue /accent is all part of your identity.. Don't change who you are. Nobody needs the queens perfect English.
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Haha thanks, I appreciate it. I agree, not everyone can achieve perfect English.
 
Practice makes perfect in terms of just talking and dialouge, nothing wrong with it, in my opinion, but i would change your cover art, profile pic and maybe thumbnails, and make them simple, straight forward and pop out to your audience
 
Soul Hyorinmaru said:
Practice makes perfect in terms of just talking and dialouge, nothing wrong with it, in my opinion, but i would change your cover art, profile pic and maybe thumbnails, and make them simple, straight forward and pop out to your audience
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Cover art yeah I might need to change it but my profile pic and thumbnails seem fine. There are much worst thumbnails I seen out there but managed to gain a lot of views.
 
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