What do i need to improve on

[MidasGaming]

Hi guys i am just wondering what i need to improve on here is my videos from odest to newest (there is only 3)
First:

Second(first commentay):

And final:

Thank you to those that leave me feedback i just want to know how to makemy videos better also if you have suggestions for future videos let me know

 

[CainDamon]

i think its fine just stick a solid subject....don't worry i have that problem aswell

 

[MidasGaming]

thanks