What can i improve on?

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Atomable

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Yo if anyone could watch this and tell me when i can do better to make it more entertaining or just better in general i'd really appreciate it :)
 
Hey Dude :)

Just watched your video. Here are some comments:

I really like the concept of the video. I did not know people did this in fortnite haha.

You seem to have a great voice and personality. I was entertained the whole way through.

There were many great moments, like the dab at 3:15. I think you are good at making the video entertaining.

Here are some things i would change/consider:
  • I think you should have explained the process of the competition. So that the viewer knows which rounds and categories there are in the competition.
  • I think the music used in the transition at around 2:20 was a bit loud. Also, I think it would have been better without the music fade in, like you did at the transition at 3:25
  • I think you could have edited the ending so that your win was more hype.
All in all, really cool content. You got a new sub ;)

/Die Man
 
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