Watcha Think

[Toaster]

Still trying to find out how to do this. Any feed back would be appreciated preferably suggested how improvements good be made or what its really lacking for it to grasp your attention. I would ask that you watch the whole thing. That way if there's some thing you like later in the video you can tell me why that is better than the rest. Thanks always

 

[MudanTV]

Well, the start wasn't really that strong. It's important to get the viewers attention in the first 15 seconds but watching the menu with some guys talking to eachother isn't the most intriguing.
The text on screen at first isn't really that readable. Good tip is to either change the color/add border or add shadow so it would differ from the video.
Would have also liked more commentary, it's kinda hard to commentate all the time at first but maybe starting out with a compilation of good clips would be better then since most of the time the video couldn't hold my attention.
I might also not be the right person to judge since I'm not that big fan of rainbow six and don't have experience with it myself.