Trailer For my channel is ready :)

[Andrea]

Here is the new Trailer for my channel,check it out!

 

[ItsTehShadow]

Looking good, if I could just offer some improvement. To sound correct it should really say "Life Advice" instead of "Life Advices" and also on the first bit of text it says "Games" and it should say "Game".

Sorry for being picky, just a few things I noticed

 

[Andrea]

gam

Looking good, if I could just offer some improvement. To sound correct it should really say "Life Advice" instead of "Life Advices" and also on the first bit of text it says "Games" and it should say "Game".

Sorry for being picky, just a few things I noticed

thanks man,i didnt notice it,my english is not the best i will correct it right now

 

[ItsTehShadow]

thanks man,i didnt notice it,my english is not the best i will correct it right now

That's alright, its not a big problem and only re-upload it if you want, it's still a good trailer

 

[Andrea]

uploaded the new one!

 

[ItsTehShadow]

uploaded the new one!

Yeh, it reads a lot better now. Good trailer anyway