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- On your first video (BattleField Hardline Montage), the video lacks footage on-timing with your music. I'd suggest you to cut a little more stuff out of your "epic" clips, in most cases its just use walking up to you opponent, shoot them, then waste few seconds by just walking away.
- Highly recommend you checking "RE:Vision Effects Twixtor" for those slow focus on your "sick/long shot kills" bruh.
- When it comes to your first player matches, would suggest to sometime adjust the brightness & contrast on your gameplays, in most cases viewers can get bored seeing the same ol' map and its tone of atmosphere. example if its a sandy map, edit your video to make look a bit more organdy then usual, if the map has snow involve turning a bit blue... hell scumbags like FaZe Clan even use this method.
- Be careful on what music you use on your videos, it seems you got a strike on your very first video with the song: "Gold Dust (Flux Pavilion Remix)" by DJ Fresh
- You're commentating skills are decent, but I think you throw in a little more enthusiasm, like for and example: In your Last Of Us Multiplayer matches, someone killed you with a mozultoss and you were like "OHH NOO AAAAAHH" Another good example:
- Be involve in Twitch, its gamer-central there.
Overall you're just starting and you seem like a chill guy, that enjoy playing xbox video games. Personally I'm not a huge gamer fan, I rate your channel
6.5/10 cause of you, it seem you may the potential of being the next stereotype gamer (no offense), for your videos on the other hand.. its a start
4/10.