Thoughts on my new intro?

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VenomRaptor

VenomRaptor

What?
Any thoughts? I'd like some feedback before I start using it.

Edit: I deleted the video.

* I really need to start posting again so I can actually get enough cash to use real links XD
 
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My thoughts.. Just opinions..

It's way too long, and really tacky. Especially the font.. I think just the last part of your intro will suffice.
 
Kyrie said:
My thoughts.. Just opinions..

It's way too long, and really tacky. Especially the font.. I think just the last part of your intro will suffice.
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I'm not really worried about the length. What specifically do you dislike about the font. The type face or the color and blending options?
 
VenomRaptor said:
I'm not really worried about the length. What specifically do you dislike about the font. The type face or the color and blending options?
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Everything about it doesn't work.. But the length is important. I get bored.. that's not good to start your video..

It just doesn't fit with the intro (the font)
 
Yeah, its pretty tacky. Its mainly the composition of the ending" logo" vs the background. You could easily fix all this with your toys on a shelves and a better logo/credits just popping up. The length would be fixed as well. I think the worse part of it is the Raptor Media box. I did enjoy the toys spinning. It was some what creative. It reminds me of the Boomerang TV bumps. Example: /watch?v=dQ-YrH8kSbI[DOUBLEPOST=1387353012,1387352740][/DOUBLEPOST]It you want to chat I can give you some pointers out how to improve your channel.
 
CaponDesign said:
Yeah, its pretty tacky. Its mainly the composition of the ending" logo" vs the background. You could easily fix all this with your toys on a shelves and a better logo/credits just popping up. The length would be fixed as well. I think the worse part of it is the Raptor Media box. I did enjoy the toys spinning. It was some what creative. It reminds me of the Boomerang TV bumps. Example: /watch?v=dQ-YrH8kSbI
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Yeah, I was actually thinking about changing my logo at the end, I've been using it for like 3 years now and it really doesn't fit with anything anymore.

CaponDesign said:
It you want to chat I can give you some pointers out how to improve your channel.
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You're welcome to give me whatever ideas you have.
 
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