Thoughts on my Intro/Outro - any help would be great!

[StuWilson]

Hey everyone!

Just wanted to see what people thought of the intro and outro on my videos, I tried to go for the handrawn effect with the writing that looks hand drawn and a sort-of flipbook style to both the outro and intro - but I also wanted it to look clean and professional! Any thoughts would be great

You can find the intro/outro i'm talking about on any of the videos on my channel which is StuTalks, or you can find on my profile! http://www.youtube.com/user/StuTalks

Thanks!

 

[Yomarz]

I really dig it. Its got some great design and has a cool indie feel. The problem I have with it is that personally I feel like its a bit too slow, especially for the intro. Also the muted dark green isn't all that visually stimulating. It's not obnoxious, which is good, but it's also a bit too far in the opposite direction for my tastes.

But I'm just one guy.

 

[StuWilson]

Thanks man, really appreciate the feedback! I was a little sceptical over the green colour so might change that!