Thoughts on my content?

[LordXemnas XIII]

Hey guys I would like to know if any of you guys would be able to give some feed back on my newer videos and possibly channel as a whole. I will have new videos tomorrow and friday in case people want to see my current content. Thank you very much for your time hope to hear from you all soon!

 

[Jawad Soomro]

Nice channel, nice avatar, nice banner, nice audio quality!
You should make 30 seconds trailer to attract more viewers
You need to work on your thumbnails a little bit more
Try to speak a lot in ur videos
Make intro and outro for ur channel

 

[LordXemnas XIII]

Nice channel, nice avatar, nice banner, nice audio quality!
You should make 30 seconds trailer to attract more viewers
You need to work on your thumbnails a little bit more
Try to speak a lot in ur videos
Make intro and outro for ur channel

Thank you for your feedback! I will for sure be working on a trailer this weekend and of course add more talking to my videos. I'll see what I can do for an intro and outro thank you!

 

[mercmonster]

Hey man, yeah, your channel art works - although you should fix it so it says "Your Place for Kingdom Hearts, Halo and More!" as opposed to "You're". Your thumbnails could definitely use some tweaking, mainly the Kingdom Hearts ones. Your sound and video quality is good though, and you're definitely off to a good start!

 

[LordXemnas XIII]

Hey man, yeah, your channel art works - although you should fix it so it says "Your Place for Kingdom Hearts, Halo and More!" as opposed to "You're". Your thumbnails could definitely use some tweaking, mainly the Kingdom Hearts ones. Your sound and video quality is good though, and you're definitely off to a good start!

Oh wow I never even noticed I had it as You're great catch! It might be a force of habit since I say you are a lot in text. I will be sure to work on my thumbnails or find someone who could I just uploaded my let's play Kingdom Hearts on with a test thumbnail. Thank you for the feedback!