TACOS TAKE OVER!

[Kyle Janulis]

YOU WILL NEVER BELEAVE THIS!
THE TACOS HAVE TAKEN OVER!

Today we go to WAR!

Tips, Advice and criticism is all more then welcomed! If you think it is stupid and completely sucks tell me as well and I won't quite my day job!

If you liked it please give it a thumbs up and share it with your friends, it would be much appreciated!

 

[Jaise]

The only thing I would really change is that there was really no payoff in the end. Other than that, it was great!

 

[Kyle Janulis]

The only thing I would really change is that there was really no payoff in the end. Other than that, it was great!

What do you mean by no pay off?
Thanks though

 

[Jaise]

What do you mean by no pay off?
Thanks though

The joke seemed as though it was building up to something, but it really didn't. It had no real act structure (most trailers do).

 

[Kyle Janulis]

The joke seemed as though it was building up to something, but it really didn't. It had no real act structure (most trailers do).

Alright, Thanks I'll try and work on that