Some of my painful stories...

[FourGoldenTurtles]

Just a little video I made talking about my painful stories.
Any feedback would be amazing, what am I doing right? What can I improve on (be honest)?
Being new I've had very little views and so hardly any feedback so I really don't know if I'm any good at this YouTubing stuff.

 

[F*CKINGENIOUS]

It has potential. I think some silly stick figure drawings to illustrate what you are talking about would be a nice touche.

 

[FourGoldenTurtles]

Thanks a lot for the advice!