Should I use this instead of what i'm currently using?

Coda

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For those who seen my current videos know i fly in for my introduction and a logo comes up, but my girlfriend said it looked to childish, so thought id change it up. This is what i came up with, still needs work though. am i on the right path? suggestions?
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Pretty nice. There's a lot to work with here. Honestly, the biggest problem in my mind is that there's just too much going on, and you need to decide what to take out.

The most interesting part of the logo is the background, as I assume it's completely your own work, and so essentially the truest indicator of your talent and appeal. While the Minecraft figures may be unique within the context of the game (I don't play Minecraft. Are they?), I don't think they do much to establishing your own personality. While the character and his pet may be "you", in a weird way they're the least "you" thing about the logo.

Your name should almost certainly be more prominent. Perhaps just a larger font where it is, or perhaps it should be the centerpiece of your logo. I would also consider just using the head or a "bust" (shoulders up) of your character in your logo. It gets the point across that it's Minecraft with less clutter. While the hand-drawing is neat, I'd recommend photoshopping a screencap of your character in its place.

Just my 2 cents. Hope it helps![DOUBLEPOST=1381131816,1381131667][/DOUBLEPOST]Just wanted to drop a few adjectives that come to mind when I see your logo: fun, friendly, inviting, colorful, energetic. Most of that comes from the background, though the animal does help. :)
 
Pretty nice. There's a lot to work with here. Honestly, the biggest problem in my mind is that there's just too much going on, and you need to decide what to take out.

The most interesting part of the logo is the background, as I assume it's completely your own work, and so essentially the truest indicator of your talent and appeal. While the Minecraft figures may be unique within the context of the game (I don't play Minecraft. Are they?), I don't think they do much to establishing your own personality. While the character and his pet may be "you", in a weird way they're the least "you" thing about the logo.

Your name should almost certainly be more prominent. Perhaps just a larger font where it is, or perhaps it should be the centerpiece of your logo. I would also consider just using the head or a "bust" (shoulders up) of your character in your logo. It gets the point across that it's Minecraft with less clutter. While the hand-drawing is neat, I'd recommend photoshopping a screencap of your character in its place.

Just my 2 cents. Hope it helps![DOUBLEPOST=1381131816,1381131667][/DOUBLEPOST]Just wanted to drop a few adjectives that come to mind when I see your logo: fun, friendly, inviting, colorful, energetic. Most of that comes from the background, though the animal does help. :)

Thanks, the background image is not my creation sadly. The avatar is myself, and the reason i have a cat in hands is because in episode 5 you get introduced to " Mr Cat" won't spoil anything but hes not a regular cat.
 
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Thanks, the background image is not my creation sadly. The avatar is myself, and the reason i have a cat in hands is because in episode 5 you get introduced to " Mr Cat" won't spoil anything but hes not a regular cat.

Hmm, well id say at least try not to use something that you didnt make yourself xD i mean, ofcourse you can upto a certain point, but that does make it less personal
 
Hmm, well id say at least try not to use something that you didnt make yourself xD i mean, ofcourse you can upto a certain point, but that does make it less personal
That is why its just the background and not the focal point!

Besides its only on screen for maybe 10 seconds max
 
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