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Hey MrHellaciouz,

I've check out your channel and your videos, and here's my opinion...

Your channel art is good. And your intro/outro are fine as well. However, in my opinion, the lack of interest in your videos, doesn't come from there. First of all, you only have 2 actual gaming videos uploaded at the moment. And both of them were uploaded relatively recently. I think you are expecting way too much, so early. Animation videos and gaming videos are entirely different things. Gaming videos are 80% all about commentary and how you present yourself as a person. And what I saw on one of your NBA videos, was a person with a rather inflated ego. I don't know if it was an character or the real you, but personally I didn't really enjoy that. Also, your commentary is rather bland, so you definitely have to work on that. But other than that, the video's were okay, the sound effects added a nice touch to the atmosphere. One other minor thing... Your face cam could take up a little bit less space on the screen.

Best of luck,

MercIndustries
 
You are right, that isnt the real me, i actually thought i would try to create a character but i guess i should try to be myself rather than trying to be funny or anything else. Thank you!
 
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