Review on Channel Needed.
- Thread starter Zesty
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Baylze
Overwatch YouTuber
Hey Zesty, I'm Baylze! I'd love to review your channel. 
First of all I really enjoy your name; I assume it's based on the fact that 'Zesty' is a synonym for being like energetic/juicy? It's a really awesome name to have for a gaming channel, as it has hte potential to reflect your type of commentary and playstyle. Your channel branding (channel art & icon) seem to be somewhat unrelated to your content, though. You've established a colour (orange) that you want to base your brand around, which is awesome, but I'd aim to create graphics that more accurately reflect your content! Graphics to do with gaming (specifically the games that you are uploading) will give a potential subscriber a much better impression, and will further influence them to want to subscribe to you!
Speaking about your grammatical and linguistic choices, your video titles are really well done. You use capital letters effectively to draw the audiences attention to the key information in the video title, and the usage of the vertical line is really good in terms of cutting up This Videos Content | Series/Game. The thumbnails seems very minimalistic, and while the use of colour (in your most recent video) is really bright and extravagent, you should really try and make your text stand out more; either by making the colour of the text contrast the colour of the background, or by just making the text bigger! =]
For example, instead of;
Maybe something like;
Just something to add a little more impact to your thumbnails!
Your commentary has improved SO MUCH since your first video. I watched your introduction video, and then watched your "How to balance School & YouTube", and the change in your voice and confidence is awesome to see! You sound much better in your most recent videos, and the commentary is much easier and more pleasing to listen to. I think some small changes in your graphics and branding, along with some other small stuff which I expect us small YouTubers will pick up along the way, you'll do awesome!
If you have any questions, I'm down to talk man! Best of luck with your channel!
Baylze
First of all I really enjoy your name; I assume it's based on the fact that 'Zesty' is a synonym for being like energetic/juicy? It's a really awesome name to have for a gaming channel, as it has hte potential to reflect your type of commentary and playstyle. Your channel branding (channel art & icon) seem to be somewhat unrelated to your content, though. You've established a colour (orange) that you want to base your brand around, which is awesome, but I'd aim to create graphics that more accurately reflect your content! Graphics to do with gaming (specifically the games that you are uploading) will give a potential subscriber a much better impression, and will further influence them to want to subscribe to you!
Speaking about your grammatical and linguistic choices, your video titles are really well done. You use capital letters effectively to draw the audiences attention to the key information in the video title, and the usage of the vertical line is really good in terms of cutting up This Videos Content | Series/Game. The thumbnails seems very minimalistic, and while the use of colour (in your most recent video) is really bright and extravagent, you should really try and make your text stand out more; either by making the colour of the text contrast the colour of the background, or by just making the text bigger! =]
For example, instead of;
Maybe something like;
Just something to add a little more impact to your thumbnails!
Your commentary has improved SO MUCH since your first video. I watched your introduction video, and then watched your "How to balance School & YouTube", and the change in your voice and confidence is awesome to see! You sound much better in your most recent videos, and the commentary is much easier and more pleasing to listen to. I think some small changes in your graphics and branding, along with some other small stuff which I expect us small YouTubers will pick up along the way, you'll do awesome!
If you have any questions, I'm down to talk man! Best of luck with your channel!
Baylze