Review on a 3-minute kids video is required

[Sanan Ibrahim]

Hi all!
I just made this new video to my channel and looking forward to your precious words about my work. Kindly watch and let me know what you think about it.
I would really appreciate your kind suggestions and recommendations.

Regards!

 

[Rhody Seth]

Voices could be a little louder or the music a little softer. Also maybe do a sped up version of the orange squeezing. Those are my thoughts!

 

[Sanan Ibrahim]

Voices could be a little louder or the music a little softer. Also maybe do a sped up version of the orange squeezing. Those are my thoughts!

Thank you for your precious words. Will do it.

 

[OntheWrist]

I like the intro, good editing! You might want to cut it down to 10 seconds though, it was a little long.

Same comment as Rhody. The voices are really quite. Work on the balance of the music vs the voice. You could also include some visual screen markers like "Step 1: Squeeze".