Review of my second video

Kosmog

Kosmog

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Hey,


This is my second video in english since I changed from making gaming videos in my native language. Please check it and give me a feedback ( I wrote some questions below to help you with the review )


Questions for review:
1. What do you think about the background music? it's too loud or too quiet? It's good as it is now ?
2. Do you like the mix between facecam, images and videos? Do you think I need to show my face more or to include more images/videos instead?
3. What do you think about my english skills ? I know I made some pronunciation mistakes and I hope my accent and english will get better in time.
4. Was the subject interesting ?


 
Hey there!

1 - The background music as for me is perfect, not too loud, not too quiet, its just perfect!
2 - This kind of video that you are making I think that you should move a bit more, maybe showing your hands. Good hand movements makes what you are saying more credible. By showing your hands will make yourself a bit more far away which is good so we don't see your eye movement. Moving your body just a tiny bit more will help as well so nobody sees that you're reading. By being a bit more far away from the camera leaves you more space on your side to add images or text while you are talking which makes the video more interactive.
3 - Well, English is good, but some people may find it a bit hard to understand because of the accent, but that's something you can work on with time.
4 - Subject for me was interesting! Nothing else to add.

I wish you success with your channel! :D
 

Great review ! Thanks !

About 2nd point. The problem is I don't have a teleprompter and I made one myself for smartphone, so I need to be pretty close to the camera to see and understand what's on it. I already filmed my next video, but for the next one, I'll try to stay at a distance a lil' bit bigger. Another problem I have here is that my camera tripod is not tall enough, but this can be solved easily.
 
background music was perfectly on point! Your English, yeah not perfect but for someone who is learning. its amazing and I can tell it will only get better since I know you recognize your mistakes and you will fix them :D. also the content is effing awesome! Who does not love time travel!
 
Kosmog said:
Great review ! Thanks !

About 2nd point. The problem is I don't have a teleprompter and I made one myself for smartphone, so I need to be pretty close to the camera to see and understand what's on it. I already filmed my next video, but for the next one, I'll try to stay at a distance a lil' bit bigger. Another problem I have here is that my camera tripod is not tall enough, but this can be solved easily.
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I made a teleprompter as well, mine was made with one shoe box and one glass from a picture frame. size is perfect for an iPAD mini. I can go as far as 1.5 to 2 meters away from the camera. I use that teleprompter on my nutrition channel. From my experience the more videos you make the more comfortable and natural you will be, try to improve something in every video.
 
Elysia said:
background music was perfectly on point! Your English, yeah not perfect but for someone who is learning. its amazing and I can tell it will only get better since I know you recognize your mistakes and you will fix them :D. also the content is effing awesome! Who does not love time travel!
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Thanks a lot. Yeah, I know my mistakes and I'll try to fix them. I like that you're interested in my content. Thanks !


@RemusYouTube Thanks man.. you have a lot of subs. Great channel you have !
 
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