Review of my latest video

[Kosmog]

Hi everyone,

What do you think about my latest video ( embedded below ) and my channel's banner, which I just created few moments ago ?

I'm not a native english speaker. It's my pronunciation ok ? I think I need to be more enthusiastic

 

[javacentral]

It feels a bit slow. I'd give it a bit more energy and maybe some subtitles?

 

[Kosmog]

Thx for feedback. I'll include subtitles in my next video.