Review My Video Please

[DeanzEpic]

. Audience retention is 34%. Most viewers leave after 2mins. 1) What should I do to get a higher audience retention rate? 2) what did you like about the video? Thanks in advance. - DeanzEpic

 

[CristyTango]

I feel like it has to do with how slow and unnatural you seem. It is kind of a turn off when you seem rehearsed- you want people to laugh and have fun? You need too look like you are having fun yourself! Relax. You have some funny jokes, you just need better and faster delivery.
Your count down intro was way too long.
From 1:46 to 1:43 the screen was just black. People would probably just tune out at that point. Also the attack of the birds picture stayed on for too long.
Something that you should watch out for is your editing. Some times it looks like you are waiting for the camera to start recording. Just watch out for that.

I also think people might tune out because you take to long getting to the clips. Maybe if you had a better camera and better sound quality, people would be more patient. (I have the same problem too)

I hope that this helped at least a little!

 

[MannyCastro]

Overall the video was good but their are some things you can do to improve, for example try cutting down your videos and get rid of some "dead air" like when you aren't saying anything or there is nothing on the screen. You also seemed a bit static throughout, try moving around some and speak up a little, it can help a lot. I really like the video, just the few things I mentioned are probably some of the reason's your audience retention rate is low

 

[Loki Doki]

as Cristy said. also the title suggests a video full of clips. and when they realise your doing some comedy in between each video they might tune out. the comedy needs to be much shorter and quicker.

 

[DeanzEpic]

I feel like it has to do with how slow and unnatural you seem. It is kind of a turn off when you seem rehearsed- you want people to laugh and have fun? You need too look like you are having fun yourself! Relax. You have some funny jokes, you just need better and faster delivery.
Your count down intro was way too long.
From 1:46 to 1:43 the screen was just black. People would probably just tune out at that point. Also the attack of the birds picture stayed on for too long.
Something that you should watch out for is your editing. Some times it looks like you are waiting for the camera to start recording. Just watch out for that.

I also think people might tune out because you take to long getting to the clips. Maybe if you had a better camera and better sound quality, people would be more patient. (I have the same problem too)

I hope that this helped at least a little!

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it! I'll take your advice into consideration when I make future videos [DOUBLEPOST=1462897784,1462897619][/DOUBLEPOST]

Overall the video was good but their are some things you can do to improve, for example try cutting down your videos and get rid of some "dead air" like when you aren't saying anything or there is nothing on the screen. You also seemed a bit static throughout, try moving around some and speak up a little, it can help a lot. I really like the video, just the few things I mentioned are probably some of the reason's your audience retention rate is low

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely make changes going forward! [DOUBLEPOST=1462897955][/DOUBLEPOST]

as Cristy said. also the title suggests a video full of clips. and when they realise your doing some comedy in between each video they might tune out. the comedy needs to be much shorter and quicker.

Thanks for your input, I appreciate it! I'll make some changes going forward