Review me

[PicklePantzzz]

Hey guys,
I have recently just started recording and I would love feedback on my videos. So if you could, please go to my channel and have a look at my first video and give me positive and negative feedback but in a constructive way. Like if you feel I could improve at something tell me with examples/advice.
Your help would be very much appreciated.
Thanks
PP

 

[Noir Proxy]

Your commentary is too low and muffled to understand. I suggest making a proper video series before doing a Q&A as Q&A videos are for followers who are interested in what you have done so far and what you hope to do in the future. Basically you need followers for a Q&A video but you also need a good mic. Buy a mic if you want to do commentary properly.

 

[fattmat]

Maybe take a few smaller breathes, I can hear you deep breathe at some parts in the video.