Procrastination! Comedy Music Video!

[Thrashbat]

Hey YTTalk!

This is my second comedic music video - Untitled For Now (Procrastination). Watch it now - don't wait until later!

And of course, if you'd like to make the song your own or give it to someone else, you can see the whole comedy EP here:
http://smarturl.it/ICABW_EP

@Bluebear @ChunkeyPanda @JeriKane @SlayZombi @thedigblackbick @benoftheweek @FantasyGamerX@kkushalbeatzz @Stike96 @Fibula @UltimateKirbyBoi @Brent Blogs @Acidicfriend

What do you think of this video? Was it better than It Could Always Be Worse?

 

[benoftheweek]

Hey YTTalk!

This is my second comedic music video - Untitled For Now (Procrastination). Watch it now - don't wait until later!

And of course, if you'd like to make the song your own or give it to someone else, you can see the whole comedy EP here:
http://smarturl.it/ICABW_EP

@Bluebear @ChunkeyPanda @JeriKane @SlayZombi @thedigblackbick @benoftheweek @FantasyGamerX@kkushalbeatzz @Stike96 @Fibula @UltimateKirbyBoi @Brent Blogs @Acidicfriend

What do you think of this video? Was it better than It Could Always Be Worse?

OH MY GOD THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!! This video explains me everyday XD

 

[Acidicfriend]

your character models are the main thing to be worked on. though they are not bad, they could be improved and could be given a style of their own. atm, they are very generic, same with your colors.
the animation is getting smoother though so keep it up.

 

[Thrashbat]

OH MY GOD THIS IS HILARIOUS!!!! This video explains me everyday XD

I'm really glad you liked it!

your character models are the main thing to be worked on. though they are not bad, they could be improved and could be given a style of their own. atm, they are very generic, same with your colors.
the animation is getting smoother though so keep it up.

Thank you for the suggestions. Can you be more specific as to how to make them look less generic?

 

[Acidicfriend]

I'm really glad you liked it!

Thank you for the suggestions. Can you be more specific as to how to make them look less generic?

your coloring needs improvement, giving it a new style plus, your line art can be improved as well as your character models.