Personal development video - your honest opinion please!

[Social Charles]

Hi, I'm new here!

I'm doing videos about personal development.

I would like to have your honest opinion and feedback on an emotional video where I'm talking out to my dad.

I would like to have feedback on:
-Is it too long?
-Do you lose interest anytime during the video?
-Do you think it is interesting? Does it give you any value?
-Any grammatical errors in the text?

Link:

Please don't share it, I have uploaded as unlisted!
Thank you!

 

[Sooner535]

Bravo I liked it the music was good the letter was good, 10/10 would cry again

 

[Social Charles]

Bravo I liked it the music was good the letter was good, 10/10 would cry again

Thank you very much.

I would appreciate if anyone else would take their time?

 

[metrokenshin]

Very emotional, The music and the text is what made me feel sad and makes you wonder whats going to happen towards the end of the video

 

[karlsanada10]

It was definitely good, but since I don't understand your language, I kinda lost interest at some point because I got distracted by some things. It's a great video, and glad your dad approved of this.

 

[Social Charles]

It was definitely good, but since I don't understand your language, I kinda lost interest at some point because I got distracted by some things. It's a great video, and glad your dad approved of this.

You didn't think the subtitles was enough to keep you interested?

 

[karlsanada10]

You didn't think the subtitles was enough to keep you interested?

No, that's not what I meant. I'm used on reading subtitles, but sometimes I get distracted to check some things while the video is still playing.

 

[aranyoli1231]

Great video but I think it's a little too long. I would say videos should be maximum 6 mins.

 

[Social Charles]

Thanks for the feedback. I can tell you that the version with swedish subtitles got viral yesterday in swedish newspaper and now has almost 20k views

 

[Jackie Pearce]

This was one of the most real videos I have seen in a long time. The world needs so much more of this. Beautiful and well done!