NEW VIDEO WORKED HARD NEED FEEDBACK

[KoziOnPc]

Hi Can you give me some feedback like what i should do better or what else i could add to it to make it better quality
this is the video link:

 

[Kcomics]

Watched the first 2 mins of it. The mic quality is good. But it's just not that entertaining listening to you and your friends. I mean, you gotta have a few punchlines or great humour in the first 30 seconds of you video to keep people watching.

Maybe you guys can do some highlights version first? That's would be easier to condense the humour.