New Series - Word of the Day - pilot

[Plymouth J Cliffords]

Would love feedback on the pilot of my new "Word of the Day" series:

 

[ViciousCritic]

Great. Just what the world needs, help screwing up the English language.

 

[Plymouth J Cliffords]

 

[Cody Pulliam]

Awesome Idea. really solid but i think what would step it up.

Make the videos shorter.

Like under a minute. That way people wont have chance of losing focus

And edit the intro animation and standard text overlay.

Super solid though keep it up!

 

[Plymouth J Cliffords]

And edit the intro animation and standard text overlay.

Thanks, what did you mean by "edit the intro animation and standard text overlay"?

 

[Cody Pulliam]

It feels a tad cheesy and unprofessional in the beginning and when the text of word is the there.

See if you can up it a bit.

there are some awesome simple ways to spice up videos in vegas, AA, Premiere, FCP anything your using

This is all just constructive criticism so in the end do as you wish and i mean no offense

 

[Plymouth J Cliffords]

It feels a tad cheesy and unprofessional in the beginning and when the text of word is the there.

See if you can up it a bit.

there are some awesome simple ways to spice up videos in vegas, AA, Premiere, FCP anything your using

This is all just constructive criticism so in the end do as you wish and i mean no offense

No offense taken! I appreciate this immensely!

The issue is that I'm not really much of a graphics guy so I don't know how much better I can make it. I also don't have too much time lol

 

[Cody Pulliam]

Its not bad

Just try to make it better video by video

You have a solid idea and would be a shame if something this simple would the cause of it not growwing to huge proportions

 

[Plymouth J Cliffords]

Its not bad

Just try to make it better video by video

You have a solid idea and would be a shame if something this simple would the cause of it not growwing to huge proportions

Thanks - I do try to improve as I go along (see the progression with my telemarketer pranks). Please, please continue to offer your thoughts and critique - that's the main reason I joined this site!!!