New intro with tweaks, need input!

[Jason Liu]

 

[BlockDesigns]

Lighting is too harsh,
Other than that its good!

 

[Username_unknown98989]

I like everything but maybe shorten it to around 6-7 seconds its too long in my opinion.

 

[Chace Nobody]

Just a few seconds too long, but I like it

 

[bellathemua]

Just a few seconds too long, but I like it

Yep if you can crunch it shorter it'd be great!