New Intro and Music

[BrainDead Werx]

So I asked you guys what you thought of one of my videos, and you guys said I should add an intro and get some lighting for my face. Well here is a new video with a new intro, new music for both the intro and outro, and I just used a cheap lighting source. Tell me what you think!

Tell me if you think I should improve anything. Check out the rest of my channel and let me know what you think.

 

[markkaz]

Excellent! The intro is quick, music is exciting.
The music works well for the outro too.
I would recommend that you make SUBSCRIBE more prominent.
Either swap places between SUBSCRIBE and MORE VIDEOS
or have both of them on the left side with the same size font.
You could also put this on the left:

SUBSCRIBE
FOR MORE
VIDEOS

and just annotate all that text as a Subscribe annotation.

 

[BrainDead Werx]

That is a good idea. I might as well update my outro. My next two videos are both completely edited, so I will just upload them while I work on a new outro.

I was actually doing annotations on my last video I uploaded and was thinking of adding a link to my videos page, but I think if I tweaked it a little it would look better.

THANK YOU!