New channel looking for constructive feedback!

[MadamSharky]

Hi guys! Thank you so much for having a forum like this to help out someone like me! I'm completely brand new to youtube, but it's something I've been wanting to pursue for a long time. And now I've finally started!

Since I'm completely new, I was hoping to get some feedback on my videos. I do a let's play gaming channel.

You can find my channel here: https://www.youtube.com/c/MadamSharky

Here's my best video I've done so far, but it's a montage of my let's plays, so that's why I threw in the link to my channel, just in case you'd rather watch an actual let's play

Thanks again for taking a look! I'm gonna check out the other parts of the forum to soak up as much information as I can!

 

[CaptainDelugo]

You ma'am, I could learn from you, I am just plain boring but you, you are excited, full of energy!
Your editing is very good, you nail it, but I'd suggest to use a different font as subtitles than Pewdiepie does, just because you want to grow strong as yourself, not as a Pewdiepie imitator

Because I liked the video I sailed to yer channel and got this for ya:
Banner is cool, cool to have yourself as a cartoon character over there too!
You seem very consistent in uploading which is nice and your thumbnails are also cool!

Your videos are perfect! You are certainly creating yourself a personality on there, keep it up

 

[MadamSharky]

You ma'am, I could learn from you, I am just plain boring but you, you are excited, full of energy!
Your editing is very good, you nail it, but I'd suggest to use a different font as subtitles than Pewdiepie does, just because you want to grow strong as yourself, not as a Pewdiepie imitator

Because I liked the video I sailed to yer channel and got this for ya:
Banner is cool, cool to have yourself as a cartoon character over there too!
You seem very consistent in uploading which is nice and your thumbnails are also cool!

Your videos are perfect! You are certainly creating yourself a personality on there, keep it up

Oh thank you! This really means a lot to me! And I saw your comments on my page, thank you for that, too!

Actually, I made sure not to use pewdiepie's font. His is called Feast of the Flesh, and I'm using what's called Badaboom BB. Basically pewdiepie's font is a bit scratchier. But they do look similar, so I can definitely look into other fonts the next time I put together a montage for sure!

Again, thank you SO much for the feedback! You're wonderful!