Neeed Good Honest feedback :)

OmletBros2

OmletBros2

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Now i have always wanted to youtube! and i finally got the computer to do so, my first gaming series is based on telltales "The Walking Dead" i recorded my first ever video today :) im not the best commentator ever, i would some some feedback,helps and tips to improve myself to keep people intrested Thanks a bunch!

/watch?v=t3RdlhoUrlc

:3
 
OmletBros2 said:
Now i have always wanted to youtube! and i finally got the computer to do so, my first gaming series is based on telltales "The Walking Dead" i recorded my first ever video today :) im not the best commentator ever, i would some some feedback,helps and tips to improve myself to keep people intrested Thanks a bunch!

/watch?v=t3RdlhoUrlc

:3
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Starting Impressions before starting:

Ok , I love the walking dead. Probably the only reason i really gravitated towards even doing this - so good choice on game (for me). Overall, first impressions on the video and description is somewhat 'meh'. I don't know that I would have that description that 'the commentary isn't good, I'll get better :(' - You may want to reword? Perhaps - 'Hey Guys, Tell me what you like, what you don't? what's working! Shall I continue more of the walking dead series? comment below! Don't forget to Rate and subscribe!'

Game Play:

I would suggest watching CinnamonToastken - I think he does really well reviews to.

Your commentary isn't that bad. your 'recap' is a bit to early. We've just watched it with you - no need to recap what we all know. I might do it halfway through the game play or 10-15 minutes in, not at minute 4.

Hah.. "Bro, bro , Bro, Bro!" - That was funny, gotta admit.

Overall, I liked it.
 
Losoyo said:
Starting Impressions before starting:

Ok , I love the walking dead. Probably the only reason i really gravitated towards even doing this - so good choice on game (for me). Overall, first impressions on the video and description is somewhat 'meh'. I don't know that I would have that description that 'the commentary isn't good, I'll get better :(' - You may want to reword? Perhaps - 'Hey Guys, Tell me what you like, what you don't? what's working! Shall I continue more of the walking dead series? comment below! Don't forget to Rate and subscribe!'

Game Play:

I would suggest watching CinnamonToastken - I think he does really well reviews to.

Your commentary isn't that bad. your 'recap' is a bit to early. We've just watched it with you - no need to recap what we all know. I might do it halfway through the game play or 10-15 minutes in, not at minute 4.

Hah.. "Bro, bro , Bro, Bro!" - That was funny, gotta admit.

Overall, I liked it.
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Thanks alot for that feedback :) i understand alittle where i can improve! maybe the desc and title need alittle change, but overall thanks alot!
 
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