Need some feedback

[Sage donkey]

Hi. I am looking for some feedback on my writing. Could someone please watch our videos, channel-humor syndicate, and let we know what you think? So far we have positive feedback, but it's all from friends so I am skeptical. Want some honest feedback. The ones I have written are pay it forward, sick kitty, and book corner. Thank you

 

[Username_unknown98989]

I'm sorry but i cannot find your youtube, the link is broken

 

[JohnKenShow]

I'm sorry but i cannot find your youtube, the link is broken

What he said. would be happy to watch and give you feed back.

 

[Sage donkey]

Sorry guys, should be fixed now

 

[Username_unknown98989]

I mean it's very enjoyable and you have a great following of 200+ subs. But yeah I like it