Need more views/feedback, thanks!

[The Simplistic Seth]

Can you please check out my channel(s) and let me know what you think? I just started to build a new channel (https://www.youtube.com/user/cinematicseth) and it isn't getting the views it rightfully deserves.

I also use my main vlog channel (https://www.youtube.com/user/thesimplisticseth) and I want you to check out my newest vid. No spamming intended

Enjoy!

 

[XXLRay]

Channel art and logo look nice for themselves but neither do they follow the same design nor do they tell anything about your channel content or upload schedule. Your thumbnails should follow the same branding idea as well. Same for your video intro.
Think about creating a dedicated channel trailer that tells visitors about your content and hooks them.
You could invest in a dedicated shotgun or lavalier mic instead of using the one of your camera and you need to plan your lighting.
The channel idea is not too bad though.

 

[The Simplistic Seth]

Wow you obviously haven't been to my channel anytime recently. I made a channel introduction video, made catchy thumbnails, and tried promoting my content. How do you like them apples?

 

[CaptainRomulus]

Hey man, your new channel is looking nice! And a really nice intro vid that tells me everything I need to know about your channel.
Things that you could possible look into in the future could be your colour choice for your channel cover photo. Maybe get rid of the drop shadow on the main text and change the sub text font below it. Other than that, keep it up!

 

[XXLRay]

Wow you obviously haven't been to my channel anytime recently.

Probably have a look at the date of my previous post.